Well, I think Foundling Fathers is a great prologue to the book I was waiting to read, but it just sketches out what I'd expected to be the meat of the story. So what's here is pretty darn good, but I was surprised that author Meg Elison framed it up the way she did.
We open with four young men, living on a remote island in what they think is 1750: Ben Franklin, George Washington, Thomas Jefferson, and John Adams. Franklin is the oldest, maybe twenty, and Adams the youngest, around four years younger. They think they are brothers, that their father was a towering, important figure, now sadly dead - though none of them remember him at all, and he was not around even in Franklin's earliest memories. They are being tutored to be leaders and masters of the world, told that they will inherit vast, separate fortunes.
They are all smart and driven: smart enough to see holes in the story they have been told and willful enough to push hard against boundaries. (Tom has just impregnated a "servant" for the second time as the novel opens.) So when Ben finds an iPhone in the privy, it both answers some questions they already had and raises vast numbers of new questions.
The reader already knows, from the back cover if nowhere else, that it is the current day, and the boys are being fed a diet of lies. They are clones of their famous namesakes - how the genetic material for such clones was obtained, or how their upbringing would make them exactly the same as those progenitors is not explained in this short novel - created by a organization of rich libertarian nutbars, the Antediluvian Society, who expect to reveal these four young men to the world, have them clearly be better and smarter and more moral people than modern politicians, something something collect the underpants, and then use these four men to take over the government of the US and rule it the way they want to.
(We can all see half a dozen fatal flaws in that plan, but that's the point: they are delusional right-wing billionaires, so of course their plans are stupid, poorly defined, and overly ambitious. They are the kind of people who think having a lot of money solves every problem, because it has solved every problem they've had so far.)
The boys' handlers - their "mother" (she did bear them, and has been raising them, but has no biological connection to them) and their tutor and the doctor who visits occasionally - start to think something is going wrong as the boys ask some odd questions later that day. They start to worry that the secret has slipped out. There's some squabbling among them: they are not all equally on board with all Antediluvian Society plans, and it doesn't go the way any of them expect, anyway.
This remote island is just a few miles off the Virginia coast. (That the boys saw airplanes a few times in earlier years is a plot point, though I'm not sure how they can have avoided seeing them all the time that close to such a crowded bit of airspace.) As we might expect from a scheme created by libertarian assholes with government connections, the "servants" are all some degree of criminals or political prisoners or the kind of people the Society would call "illegals," renditioned to the island and allowed to work there as long as they stay on good behavior. The servants revolt right about the moment the boys are about to have their own revolt, there is a confused firefight in the night, and the four boys get to the mainland and learn the truth.
At which point we get a few quick scenes of what each one of them does in the immediate aftermath, and the novel ends.
I obviously saw how few pages were left, so maybe I hoped there would be a sequel hook. But it feels like the fun part of this premise would be these four young men interacting with the modern world, each in his own way, each one failing to live up to Antediluvian Society expectations in entirely different ways. (Elison also has a couple of scenes at the end with the Society to show that these four boys were not their only plan, and the other plans are possibly even nuttier - and equally something I would have loved to see spin out at greater length.)
Elison, though, seems to both want to have her four protagonists be smart and capable - somewhat accepting the Society premise that they are "special" - while still insisting that they're absolutely normal, average people and that the myth of the Godlike White Men Founders of the 18th century is stupid and counterproductive. She also has the Society let them go with essentially no repercussions; the boys seem to actually get their promised fortunes. I find it hard to believe the kind of assholish billionaires she depicts would do anything of the sort: they are vindictive and deluded and enamored of their own special brilliance, so I'd expect anything from cruel, targeted legal actions through attempts to recapture the young men for intensive "re-education" all the way up to assassination teams.
What's here is good, but there's a lot less here than I expected. This is basically the story of the day these boys discovered everything they were told about the world was wrong, with nothing before that day and only a quick sketch of what happens afterward. Perhaps if it makes a big splash, Elison will be forced by the allure of lucre to expand on the ending: that's where I end up.
















